〈羅志海——振波浪清对联体诗集〉（不间断添加中）

振波浪清

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杯举中秋连月喝
琴横雁阵对云弹
品茶坐看青山笑
饮酒欣闻碧水潺

注：第一二句振波浪清作，第三四句罗志海作。


Autumn Eulogy

Lifted a wine cup
in the mid autumn
drank with moon
Transverse to place a lute
play to clouds
formation of flying swan goose

Tasted tea
sat and saw
the green mountain smiled
Drank wine
listened joyfully
to the blue water murmuring

Note: first and second sentences by Zhenbolangqing.
Third and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

5/9/2018对联体 ● 七绝 罗志海译
Couplet Poem ● Seven Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第5899首对联体诗
The 5,899th Couplet Poem

罗志海

柔情似水

昭君不忍琴弦拨
西子何愁水面临
古木燃情争咏月
幽泉流韵喜迎春

注：第一二句振波浪清作，第三四句罗志海作。


The Tender Feeling Like Water

Zhao Jun not to bear the heart
played the lute strings
Why did the West Lake worry about
water came in?

The ancient woods fired passions
disputed to chant moon
The secluded stream floated rhymes
happy to welcome spring

Note: first and second sentences by Zhenbolangqing.
Third and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

5/10/2018对联体 ● 七绝 罗志海译
Couplet Poem ● Seven Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第5917首对联体诗
The 5,917th Couplet Poem

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振波浪清

罗志海 发表于 2018-5-11 20:40
柔情似水

昭君不忍琴弦拨

柔情似水

昭君不忍琴弦拨
西子何愁水面临
古木燃情争咏月:strong:
幽泉流韵喜迎春:strong:

注：第一二句振波浪清作，第三四句罗志海作。

振波浪清

17
柔情似水

昭君不忍琴弦拨
西子何愁水面临
古木燃情争咏月
幽泉流韵喜迎春

注：第一二句振波浪清作，第三四句罗志海作。


The Tender Feeling Like Water

Zhao Jun not to bear the heart
played the lute strings
Why did the West Lake worry about
water came in?

The ancient woods fired passions
disputed to chant moon
The secluded stream floated rhymes
happy to welcome spring

Note: first and second sentences by Zhenbolangqing.
Third and fourth sentences by Luo Zhihai.

5/10/2018对联体 ● 七绝 罗志海译
Couplet Poem ● Seven Words of Quatrain
Translation by Luo Zhihai
第5917首对联体诗
The 5,917th Couplet Poem

曾剑之

振波浪清 发表于 2018-5-11 21:04
17
柔情似水

昭君的琵琶不是琴。

曾剑之

振波浪清 发表于 2018-5-10 13:22
16
杯举中秋连月喝
琴横雁阵对云弹

潺：小河缓缓流动的样子，或小河、小溪漫漫流动发出的声音（象声词）。
因此，用笑对潺不对品。

振波浪清

曾剑之 发表于 2018-5-12 21:54
昭君的琵琶不是琴。

昭君的琵琶不是琴

振波浪清

曾剑之 发表于 2018-5-12 22:05
潺：小河缓缓流动的样子，或小河、小溪漫漫流动发出的声音（象声词）。
因此，用笑对潺不对品。 ...

潺：小河缓缓流动的样子，或小河、小溪漫漫流动发出的声音（象声词）。
因此，用笑对潺不对品。——千真万确:strong:

曾剑之

（2）赤壁古风桨影寒------此句犯孤平。
（5）挥笔风花媚
        抚琴雪月白（今声）------此句也犯孤平。

曾剑之

（4）团结/傲然，两词结构不对应