《对联和律诗的区别》

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罗志海 发表于 2018-11-17 14:55
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徐华兵 发表于 2018-11-17 15:49
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山水情

青峰一筆湖心亂
秋水半彎雁陣橫
儒雅的人多俗務
聖賢之輩有真情


Feeling Of Landscape

A green peak is writing
heart of the lake in mess
The formation of flying swan goose is transverse
the autumn water is winding

An elegant person has many common affairs
Sages have the true feelings

11/17/2018對聯體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7299首對聯體詩
The 7,299th Two Pairs of Couplets

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罗志海 发表于 2018-11-18 08:52
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罗志海 发表于 2018-11-18 08:52
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罗志海 发表于 2018-11-18 08:52
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徐华兵 发表于 2018-11-18 17:50
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诗韵

鱼书一尺留香阁
雁字两行悬碧天
瘦削诗肩担寂寞
丰盈韵脚诉缠绵


Rhymes

In the fragrant pavilion
one foot of the fish letter staying

In the blue sky
two rows of words of the wild geese hanging

The thin poetic shoulder shouldered loneness
The rich rhymes complained lingering

11/17/2018對聯體 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Two Pairs of Couplets ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7308首對聯體詩
The 7,308th Two Pairs of Couplets

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徐华兵

向老师拜年！祝新年万事如意！

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罗志海

徐华兵 发表于 2019-2-4 11:21
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祝诗友新年快乐，万事如意！


诗情画意

熙熙花市蝶衣艳
翠翠柳丛燕羽鲜
云卷诗情风谱曲
山生画意水弹弦


The Poetic Feelings And The Painting Moods

In the lively flower market
wings of butterflies are brilliant
In the emerald green willows
the fresh wings of swallows

Clouds roll the poetic feelings
wind writes music
Mountains emerge the painting moods
water plays strings

2/3/2019格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第7837首对联体诗
The 7,837th Two Pairs of Couplets

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罗志海

春诗

一挥春笔山川绿
几转风车华夏新
月朗星稀花解语
意绵情切夜销魂


A Spring Poem

Turning the windmill several times
China is new
Wielding a spring brush
mountains and rivers are green

Moon is bright and stars are sparse
Flowers understand words
Affection continuous
night in ecstasy

5/22/2019格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8498首对联体诗
The 8,498th Two Pairs of Couplets