《对联和律诗的区别》

罗志海

徐华兵 发表于 2019-6-10 21:29
to making money    此处making 是否有误？问好老师！

改正了,谢谢!

罗志海

徐华兵 发表于 2019-6-10 21:29
to making money    此处making 是否有误？问好老师！

已经改正,谢谢!

徐华兵

罗志海 发表于 2019-6-11 07:59
海风

三生石上三春爱

品读学习老师佳作！

罗志海

難能可貴

情為誰牽休問菊
癡因梅起去尋春
平生遣興惟詩酒
此世偷閒共水雲


Rare And Commendable

Love for whom didn’t ask chrysanthemum
Infatuation because of plum blossom I went to seek spring

Leisure in this world I with water and clouds
In my lifetime relax by poetry and wine only

7/6/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8681首對聯體詩
The 8,681th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/the-building-nest-music/#content

罗志海

哲理

乡野朦胧月
楼阁清澈湖
无诗多寂寞
有爱不孤独


Philosophy.

In the countryside the moon is hazy
Towers and pavilions around the lake is limpid
More loneliness without poetry
Love is not lonely

8/6/2019格律体新诗 ● 五绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Five Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第8883首对联体诗
The 8,883th Two Pairs of Couplets
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/decomposed-hatchet-handles/

罗志海

离别归来

归来入夜风歌壮
别去经年雁字稀
明月入怀沧海笑
家园在望远山低

Returned From Parting

Farewell through years, the words of wild geese were rare
The wind songs were strong, I came home and stayed at night
The bright moon into my bosom, the blue sea smiled
The remote mountains were low, my home was in sight

9/5/2019格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9017首对联体诗
The 9,017th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/half-a-slope/#content

徐华兵

罗志海 发表于 2019-9-6 09:23
离别归来

归来入夜风歌壮

学习品读佳作！

徐华兵

罗志海 发表于 2019-9-6 09:23
离别归来

归来入夜风歌壮

问好老师！

罗志海

徐华兵 发表于 2019-9-18 20:30
问好老师！

入夜深情问候诗友！

罗志海

溫馨

月到更深池底臥
花于夜靜水中流
素知妙笛最清耳
幸有佳聯堪暖眸


Warm

Moon laid in the bottom of the pool late at night
Flowers flowed in the water silently at night
Have known the wonderful flute most cleared my ears for some time
Fortunately, the good couplets was worth warming my eyes

9/17/2019格律體新詩 ● 七絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第9066首對聯體詩
The 9,066th Two Pairs of Couplets

https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/funny-22/#content