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青莲…… 发表于 2023-6-3 09:43
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爱老五

青莲…… 发表于 2023-6-4 07:47
构思巧妙，生动流畅，意蕴丰富，耐人品味。

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爱老五

长虹初月 发表于 2023-6-2 12:50
提赏新作，隔屏遥握，问好诗兄，周末快乐！

谢谢临帖鼓励！遥握问好！顺颂夏祺！