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罗志海

张庆东字恕鸣 发表于 2020-6-10 11:27
遣词出彩，韵叹出味。诗家情怀，尽显笔端！问好老师夏祺笔丰！！

谢谢诗友！

罗志海

逆天  

自古有情心荡荡
常年无病乐洋洋
金銮殿上孙行者
青玉案边卜玉郎


Against The Sky

Since ancient times, there has been love and heart stirring
All year round, disease free is very joyful
Bu Yulang beside the Green Jade Desk
Monkey King in Jinluan Hall

6/10/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第10282首对联体诗 The 10,282th Two Pairs of Couplets
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/are-intoxicated/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... e-c8dd7b732ad0.html

张庆东字恕鸣

罗志海 发表于 2020-6-10 20:40
逆天  

自古有情心荡荡

张庆东字恕鸣

罗志海 发表于 2020-6-10 20:40
谢谢诗友！

用词灵动曼妙，转承有力味浓。问好老师，欢迎平台交流！！

张庆东字恕鸣

罗志海 发表于 2020-6-10 20:40
谢谢诗友！

用词灵动曼妙，转承有力味浓。问好老师，欢迎平台交流！！

罗志海

张庆东字恕鸣 发表于 2020-6-11 11:53
用词灵动曼妙，转承有力味浓。问好老师，欢迎平台交流！！

谢谢诗友！下午好！！

罗志海

秋梦

秋水寂寥月色寒
战衣疲惫号音残
青山一醉梦难醒
黄雀千啼情正酣


The Autumn Dream

The autumn water was lonely and the moonlight was cold
War clothes were exhausted and the bugle call broke
The green mountain was drunk and the dream woke difficultly
The Yellow sparrows crowed a thousand times with deep feelings

6/10/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第10289首对联体诗 The 10,289th Two Pairs of Couplets
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/scattered-14/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... e-c8dd7b732ad0.html

张庆东字恕鸣

罗志海 发表于 2020-6-11 16:03
谢谢诗友！下午好！！

欣赏佳作，用词灵动，转承有力。欢迎老师平台交流！！

张庆东字恕鸣

罗志海 发表于 2020-6-11 16:03
秋梦

秋水寂寥月色寒

张庆东字恕鸣

罗志海 发表于 2020-6-11 16:03
秋梦

秋水寂寥月色寒

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