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罗志海

疏影 发表于 2020-5-7 23:24
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罗志海

红云阁主 发表于 2020-5-7 18:44
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张庆东字恕鸣

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张庆东字恕鸣

罗志海 发表于 2020-5-9 10:01
谢谢诗友！

铺陈讲究，遣词生动，细品有味。遥祝老师夏祺！  

张庆东字恕鸣

罗志海 发表于 2020-5-9 10:01
谢谢诗友！

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张庆东字恕鸣 发表于 2020-5-9 13:00
铺陈讲究，遣词生动，细品有味。遥祝老师夏祺！

谢谢诗友！

罗志海

國昌民裕

金秋九月，桂飄香，菊呈豔，遊人如織
白雁半空，聲達旦，楓映紅，度意已迷
山野花開，楊柳嬌，泉水清，固吾祖國
田園稻熟，果瓜甜，穀倉滿，佑我萌黎

注：第一三句羅志海作，第二四句葉葉新作。


Motherland Is Prosperous And People Are Rich

The golden autumn in September
osmanthus is fragrant
chrysanthemum is gorgeous
and tourists are like weaving
The white wild goose in the sky
the voice until dawn
the maple reflects the red
and the mood is lost

Fields are ripe with rice
fruits and melons are sweet
the granaries are full
bless our people
Flowers bloom in the mountains
willows are tender
springs are clear
our motherland is strong

Note: first and third sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Second and fourth sentences by Ye Yexin.

5/8/2020格律體新詩 ● 十四絕羅志海著譯
Metric New Poetry ● Fourteen Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第10042首對聯體詩 The 10,042th Two Pairs of Couplets
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/ ... ool-breeze/#content
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... e-c8dd7b732ad0.html

张庆东字恕鸣

罗志海 发表于 2020-5-9 10:01
谢谢诗友！

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罗志海 发表于 2020-5-9 20:15
國昌民裕

金秋九月，桂飄香，菊呈豔，遊人如織

罗志海

春秋  

雁过成行秋寂寞
月来有意梦逍遥
百花酿酒醉山谷
一笔挥春绿柳条


Spring And Autumn

The wild geese passed in a row and the autumn was lonely
The moon deliberately came and the dream was carefree
A hundred flowers brewed into wine to intoxicate the valley
A writing brush wielded spring green to the willow branches

5/11/2020格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Quatrain by Luo Zhihai
第10060首对联体诗 The 10,060th Two Pairs of Couplets
https://www.poemhunter.com/poem/curtain-rolls-up/
http://www.chinapoesy.com/gongxi ... e-c8dd7b732ad0.html