转化——步罗志海诗友《春思》韵

罗志海

转化——步罗志海诗友《春思》韵

桃溪曲径霞飞彩
碧水孤帆影化云
寄韵抱琴诗入梦
无言对镜泪湿巾

附原玉：春思  文 / 罗志海

黄昏柳渡舟泊岸
晨晓兰亭香沁人
不意窥窗春耀眼
凝神思友月澄心

格律体新诗 ● 七绝 吕福祥 诗 / 罗志海 译
第一一七九三首对联体诗二零二一年六月二十一日


Turned Into – Same Rhyme Of 《The Spring Thinking》Of My Poetry Friend, Luo Zhihai

On the winding path of the peach stream
the flying rosy clouds
A lone sail in the green water
its shadow turned into a cloud

Sending rhyme and hugging a lute
poems went into the dream
No words to the mirror
tears wet a towel

Poem by Lv Fuxiang
Translation by Luo Zhihai

罗志海

春思之二

黄昏柳渡舟泊岸
碧水孤帆影化云
寄韵抱琴诗入梦
凝神思友月澄心
桃溪曲径霞飞彩
晨晓兰亭香沁人
不意窥窗春耀眼
无言对镜泪湿巾

注:
第一四六七句罗志海著
第二三五八句吕福祥著
格律体新诗 ● 七律 罗志海译
第一一七九四首对联体诗 二零二一年六月二十一日


The Spring Thinking II

At dusk
boats moored at the willow ferry
A lone sail in the green water
its shadow turned into a cloud

Hugging a lute and sending rhyme
poems went into the dream
I concentrated on thinking friend
and to my heart the moon bright

At dawn
fragrance penetrated people in the orchid pavilion
On the winding path of the peach stream
the flying rosy clouds

I didn’t want to see the window
but the spring dazzling
No words to the mirror
tears wet a towel


Note:
Note: first, fourth, sixth and seventh sentences by Luo Zhihai.
Second, third, fifth and eighth sentences by Lǜ Fuxiang.
Translation by Luo Zhihai.

Metric New Poetry ● Seven Words of Eight Verses

罗志海

春思

黄昏柳渡舟泊岸
晨晓兰亭香沁人
不意窥窗春耀眼
凝神思友月澄心

格律体新诗 ● 七绝罗志海著译
第一一七一四首对联体诗二零二一年六月三日


The Spring Thinking

At dawn, fragrance penetrated people in the orchid pavilion
At dusk, boats moored at the willow ferry
I concentrated on thinking friend and the moon bright to my heart
I didn’t want to see the window but the spring dazzling

(by Luo Zhihai)

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桃溪曲径霞飞彩
碧水孤帆影化云