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醉归罗帐美人怨
銮战江湖壮士悲

格律体新诗 ● 罗志海著译
第8首五七绝对联体诗 2021年2月5日


The Strong Man And The Beautiful woman

There was the rhyme of Orchid Pavilion on the desk
The eyebrows of willow leaves before the lamp
He drunkenly returned into the silk curtain and the beautiful woman complained
Fought fiercely in rivers and lakes and the tragedy of the strong man

Metric New Poetry by Luo Zhihai, 2/5/2021
The 8th Five-Seven Words of Quatrain of Two Pairs of Couplets

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五七绝对联体诗
罗志海 / 文

刚刚14:22，午睡醒来，想到，绝句是四句，每一句的字数是相等的。为什么不可以是长短句呢？长短句也就变成词了。
我想写长短句，就叫五七绝对联体诗吧。

2021年2月3日14:22-14：40


Five-Seven Words Of Quatrains Of Two Pares Of Couplets
by Luo Zhihai

Just at 14:22, I woke up from a nap and thought that quatrains are four sentences, and the number of words in each sentence is equal. Why not long and short sentences? Long and short sentences become lyrics.
If I want to write long and short sentences, it's called the Five-Seven Words of Quatrain of Two Pairs of Couplets.

Beijing Time 20:50-21:00,2/3/2021 Transalted

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